Wednesday, July 18, 2007

D#8-1 Peer Review Reflection

First I looked at Jessica's paper about abstinence only sex education. She has a really good start on her paper. There were a couple things that she needs to change but she has researched her paper very well.

I also looked at Kelsia's paper. She has a very well written paper and it looks like she knows what she is going to do with the research she has collected. I didn't really find anything that she needed to change.

1 comment:

Tedibaer07 said...

Latron ~ Thank you for the positive feedback! Organization really does help to keep things focused and on task. I also reread your WP#2 and left you some comments. I think your topic is very controversial and you've listed several very good subtopics to discuss. I look forward to reading your final. Good luck!